I completed my first novel of a horror survival trilogy back in February. I'm currently waiting for Permuted Press to begin taking submissions once again and I'm really hoping that they'll be interested in picking it up.
Hell, I've already posted two very rough draft chapters from that first novel on these very forums.
But I figured, what the hell, I might as well post the first chapter of my sequel novel called 'The Return' here.
This is a rough draft, it hasn't even had a first edit. That'll come once I'm finished writing the book. I'm currently nearly 50,000 words into it, and considering that my first novel 'The Escape' was 111,000 words, Well, I'm not even half finished.
Read it, ignore it, whatever, I just feel like posting the first chapter.
Chris
The Return
Chapter 1
April
17, 9:41 AM
“How does it look?” Mike asked.
The man was crouched next to his long time friend as the pair scanned the
seemingly empty town of Provost. He shivered slightly in the cold morning air as
heavy snowflakes fell lazily all around him.
It was an unseasonably cold
April morning, almost a polar opposite of the warm temperatures that they had
experience during the middle and latter days of March. But for Alberta, that
was the normal way weather acted. As the old joke went, if you don’t like the
weather, wait ten minutes.
Eric Stone didn’t answer right
away as he peered through the binoculars. Eric was a big man with short cropped
light blond hair and a muscular build. He stood at six feet in height and
weighed in at an easy two hundred and twenty pounds. The man was wearing a
heavy denim jacket and blue jeans over a black t-shirt. Well worn hiking boots
adorned his feet, and there was a large battered fire axe lying on the ground
next to him. A scoped hunting rifle was strapped against his back and he had a
police issue Glock 22 handgun holstered at his right hip.
“It’s hard to tell,” Eric
breathed out, his words misting in the below freezing temperatures before his
face. He pulled the binoculars from his eyes and rubbed them with his left
hand. “There is no sign of movement anywhere.”
That fact tickled something in
the back of Mike Harris’s mind, something that he just couldn’t place his
finger on. “That’s good news, which means that most of the walkers are probably
trapped behind closed doors then. But, why are the streets so empty? We usually
see at least a handful of zombies wandering around.” Mike said and he stood up
from the crouch.
“Maybe scavenger bands already
hit this town and took out the tangos.” Eric suggested.
“That would be both good and
bad. Good because we won’t have to worry about too many of the undead, bad that
maybe they cleared out all the non-perishable foodstuffs from the Safeway
already.” Mused Mike.
Mike Harris wasn’t quite as
large as his friend Eric. He stood at five foot eleven inches in height, what
was considered to be average height and weighed considerably less, topping at
one hundred and seventy five pounds. Like Eric he was wearing a heavy denim
jacket and blue jeans, and had on sturdy hiking boots. A slightly battered and
sweat stained Diesel cap adorned his close cropped dark brown hair. Mike had a
long machete strapped to his left thigh and, like Eric, a police issue Glock 22
on his right. A Remington 870 shotgun rested lightly in his hands.
With a slight grimace, Eric got
up from his crouch and let the binoculars hang loosely against his chest.
Unconsciously he rubbed his right knee. He turned around to face the single
Avalanche truck that had brought them to the small town.
“How’s the knee feeling?” Mike
said with concern as watched his friend.
“Crouching like this doesn’t
help, but it’s feeling pretty good.” Less than month before Eric had suffered a
badly strained knee while attempting to get out of a burning high rise
apartment building in the downtown core of Calgary. It seemed like a lifetime
ago, back when there had been some semblance of law and order, before
everything finally fell apart, civilization succumbing entirely to the Rising.
Together they walked back to the
truck. Seated in the drivers seat was a young man, nearly out of his teens. He
bore a striking resemblance to Mike and anyone looking at the pair would know
that they were blood.
Another
man stood on the outside of the truck, talking to the younger Harris. “How does
it look?” He called out, seeing the two approaching the truck.
“It
looks fairly clear Jack,” Eric told him. “The Safeway appears to be intact and
there’s a truck pulled up to the loading dock at the rear of the building.
Hopefully we can get the beast running and load it up with canned and
non-perishable goods.”
Jack
stood eye to eye with Mike, but he was considerably larger. It wasn’t fat; the
man was just more muscular by far. He too was wearing blue jeans and Nike
running shoes, but instead of a heavy denim jacket, he was wearing well worn
black leather jacket. The younger man ran a hand through his neatly trimmed
black beard as his dark brown eyes scanned the town that lay in the distance.
On his right hip he had a large serrated hunting knife, and on his left there
was a heavy .357 magnum revolver. There was a heavy compound bow and quiver
strapped to his muscular back.
“Standard
procedure then?” Jack asked the pair.
Eric
shook his head. He was about to reply
when a small, wiry man in a flannel jacket and black military style cargo pants
jumped out of the bed of the truck. He had a fedora perched on top of his mousy
brown hair and was carrying a 9mm. hand gun in a shoulder holster. He was
wearing thick sunglasses that completely obscured his eyes. “Want me to drive?”
He asked.
Mike
shook his head. “Roger is doing fine, Harold, and he needs the practice
anyhow.”
Harold
shrugged. “Figured I’d offer.”
Eric
cleared his throat and continued to speak. “Yeah, we might as well continue the
way we have for the past couple of weeks.” He wiped his nose and looked back
towards the town. “Roger, you go through the center of the town and keep the
speed fairly low. The sound of the truck will attract any zombies that might be
hidden from sight.”
“Got
it,” Roger said.
“Once
we get to the Safeway, try and circle it, see if there are any visible targets.
Depending on how many groupies we manage to gather, we’ll bail and hit the
store while you continue to lead them off. Once you’re at least a couple of
blocks, leave them in the dust, circle around and come back to the store from
the opposite direction. That should give us enough time to clear out any
tango’s that are in the store.”
Mike
slapped his thighs. “Alright, lets do it people.” He moved over to the truck and climbed into
the passenger seat while Harold, Jack and Eric got into the back seat. Weapons
were neatly stowed away and in less than a minute Roger was pulling onto the
main highway and making his way to the town.
Everyone
kept their eyes on the surrounding buildings and side streets as the Avalanche
made its way through the eerily silent town. Over the past couple of weeks
since they arrived at Wainwright and joined the thousands of other survivors
that had escaped the death trap that Calgary had become, they had quickly
integrated into the military forces. Even though they weren’t officially
soldiers, they were chosen to be one of the many scavenger teams that on a
daily basis risked their lives to locate food and other essentials that were
needed by the rest of the survivors on the overcrowded base.
During
every single trip, they had encountered the undead. So far none of their small
group had suffered a bite, but there had been several close calls. Each
community they had visited always had at least a handful of the zombies, but in
one occasion there had been literally hundreds of the undead, including a
smattering of the far deadlier sprinter version.
But
the simple fact that this town was all but deserted set off warning bells in
Mike, and he was not the kind of man to ever ignore his instincts. They had yet
to let him down. “I don’t like this at all,” he voiced out to his companions.
“Neither
do I dad,” Roger agreed. His hands tightly gripped the steering wheel as he
carefully watched the snow covered street before him. “I don’t see any tracks
in the snow, do any of you?”
Good
thinking, Mike thought to himself. He was proud that his son had that idea.
Then again, during their various scavenging runs, it hadn’t been snowing. No
one answered as they too began to search the snow, looking for telltale
footprints.
In
minutes they pulled up to the Safeway and Roger slowly pulled up to the front
of the building which was located on the very edge of the small town. There
were several vehicles in the parking lot of the store. All the vehicles showed
signs of combat, and five of them were nothing more than burned out hulks. The
other vehicles, a pair of pickup trucks as well as four cars of various makes
were scattered around the front of the building. The windshields were pocked
and riddled by small arms fire and the doors had been left wide open. As they
drove past, the Avalanche’s passengers clearly saw that there were no signs of
bodies. No dispatched zombies on the ground, no one slumped over inside the
vehicles, nothing.
The
windows of the store had been smashed and there were scorch marks seemingly at
random along the front. Numerous holes could be seen in the facade of the structure,
made by small arms. There were the unmistakeable signs of looting, but even in
the dim cloud covered light, they could see that there were items on the
shelves. Roger brought the Avalanche to a complete stop before the entrance and
turned on the headlights.
The
powerful halogen bulbs pierced the stygian gloom and revealed the wreckage and
mess the looters had left during the days following the Rising. Shelves lay
half toppled, some still covered in goods, while other shelves were completely
barren. Small drifts of snow were beginning to accumulate at the edges of the
broken windows and there was a light covering over the first dozen feet or so.
Through the beams of light they could see that the floors inside were covered
in all manner of garbage and goods.
“Continue
around the back,” Mike told his son. He glanced over his shoulder to the back
seat of the truck, his eyes meeting Eric’s. “I don’t like this at all, there’s
no sign of movement inside the store. At the very least the sound of the
truck’s engine should have alerted the zombies.”
Eric’s
face was grim. “I hear that, and I agree. There’s something not right about
this.”
They
rode in silence as Roger circled to the back of the Safeway, where the tractor
trailer they had seen was located. As they passed the tractor, Eric reached out
from the backseat and placed his hand on Roger’s shoulder. “Stop here; let’s
take a quick look to see if we can get that rig running.”
“Shouldn’t
we check to see if there is anything in the trailer?” Harold asked.
“Either
way we could always use another Semi back at Wainwright.” Eric told him.
Roger
brought the Avalanche to a stop less than ten feet from the front of the
tractor. As soon as he put it in park, the four men opened the doors and got
out of the vehicle, handguns at the ready. Roger turned off the engine and
pocketed the keys to the vehicle, while Jack grabbed his large Compound bow and
slung it as well as a quiver filled with hunting arrows across his broad back.
It wouldn’t be the best weapon to use in close quarters, such as the confined
aisles of the store, but it was an excellent long range weapon. Despite the
fact that they had access to plenty of ammunition at the military base, it was
still best to conserve their ammunition whenever they could.
And
besides, a bow didn’t make anywhere near as much noise as a firearm. One of the things they had discovered over
the month since the Rising began was that the sound of a firearm discharging
brought the undead like a moth to a flame.
“Jack,
take the point, since you know how to drive those beasts.” Eric said.
With
a single nod of his head, Jack began to carefully approach the truck. He was
less than five feet away when a blood chilling howl came from the center of the
town
“What
the fuck was that?” Eric bit out through clenched teeth. Whether it was from
the cold or from the sound, god only knew.
“Fuck,
that sounds like wolves, doesn’t it?” Mike told the group as a visible shiver
ran through his body.
A
moment later the call was answered by several more loud howls, this time
sounding so close that the animals answering the call with a soul freezing cry
of their own might be just around the side of the building.
Seemingly
unfazed, Harold stood next to Mike and Eric, casually scanning the snow and
wind blown grasslands bordering the rear of the grocery store. “I think what we
are hearing is a pack of feral dogs.”
“Feral?”
Jack looked over his shoulder for a second as he approached the cab of the
tractor trailer. “But it’s been just over a month since the Rising began.” A
moment later he was pulling himself up the side of the cab, one gloved hand on
the metal bar while he held his handgun in the other. He peered into the window
of the cab.
The
next thing anyone knew there was a nearly ear-shattering scream and Jack was
flat on his back. A Zombie was at the window of the cab, its desiccated hands
clawing slowly at the glass, trying to break through to get at the man who had
just fallen.
It
was clear that in life the Zombie had been the driver of the cab. A Day &
Ross cap was still perched on its filthy matted hair. The skin was stretched
tight over the bones of its skull, which was partially obscured by a patchy
beard. Bone was visible where portions of the beard had been pulled free.
All
five men started to laugh, even Jack as he picked himself up from the ground.
It wasn’t the first time that something like this had happened to them, and
they knew that it wouldn’t be the last. Jack stood and brushed snow and dirt
off his back and legs before he faced the zombie again. “I’ll open the door and
let it out.” He told the group.
Eric
walked up and removed his fire axe from an improvised sheath he wore across his
back. “Do it.”
Over
the past couple of weeks the small group of survivors had developed a fairly
effective game-plan when it came to dealing with the zombies. If they weren’t
sprinters, they had very little to worry about, and they knew that in this
case, it was just a regular shambler zombie, one of the vast majority of the
undead that moved slowly and alone was little threat to a well armed group.
Mike, Roger and Harold all turned to face different directions, opening their
senses to their fullest, staying completely alert of their surroundings.
When
Jack tried the door to the truck he found that the door was unlocked. He stood
to the left of the door so it acted like a shield and pulled it open. The
zombie, who had been leaning on the door when it opened tumbled from the cab
and landed in an ungainly heap in the same spot that Jack had found himself
only moments before.
Eric
took a pair of steps up to the undead trucker, who at that moment was
attempting to stand up. The way he swung the axe was deceptively simple and the
blow severed the zombie’s skull from the neck. It fell to the ground and rolled
a stop a couple of feet away. The dead, milky eyes seemed to glare accusingly
at Eric as he stepped up to it and finished the job, ending the zombie’s
un-natural life.
Jack
manoeuvred around the open door of the truck and peered inside. He blew out a
steamy breath and wrinkled his nose at the smell that emanated from the cab.
“Damn, even in the cold it still smells like death. You’d figure that the
weather would at least help ease the stench!”
After a moment he did a quick once over and called back to the group.
“Cab’s clear.”
“Let’s
hope that we can get it started then.” Mike called out as he continued to scan
the surrounding area for any signs of danger. “Why don’t…” he began when a
deep, low growl came from front of the truck.
Everyone
froze in their tracks.
A
massive German Shepherd stood at the foot of the truck with its head held low
and its canines bared in a ferocious snarl. The dog had to weigh an easy
hundred pounds and it appeared to be quite well fed. It was staring at the small group, the threat
clear in not only its warning snarl, but in its stance.
“Aw,
look at the big puppy!” Harold exclaimed happily he turned his head to stare at
the animal.