We still going to see any more of your writing?

Well, I certainly hope so Andy... I think we both know that Dan is a cool dude and it is senseless to bash someone who is (normally) so nonconfrontational... there are two sides to every argument... but either way I would truly appreciate it if the bashing stopped... I come to this site to relax, and I come to this thread to enjoy Dan's writing... as of right now I can't seem to do either without looking over my shoulder...

Sun

no worries guys...it will continue....too many people requesting more...i'll add more soon!

Can't wait for the fight . is it going to be a long fight or a short one?

i'm posting the fight tomorrow - not very long..they can't kil leach other becasue of Rain..but i think it came out ok...each gets in some good hits stay tuned!

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Excellent! You were made to write fight scenes my friend! I think this was probably your best so far... though I didn't read the smutty parts that weren't posted earlier, I imagine it takes a back seat to this one...

Sonny better be somewhere working out and getting into shape if he's gonna keep up with these hard*sses... lol

Sun

Totally glad you liked it man...PM me your e-mail addy and i can send you the racy stuff....it was hort but the few i sent it to liked it..... in spirit with the books...

Just read it. You did a good job on the fight. i liked how it turned out.

The fight scene was well done. Fighting with your standard knife in its sheath is not a bad way to train if you are unable to obtain a good copy of your knife in trainier form. I enjoy sparring with several of my friends and no matter who gets tossed to the mat the most or choked out - we are still friends. You only get better by training with people that are better or at least as good as you are. By sparring with each other we get to know each others strengths and weaknesses. Makes us a tighter unit in the field.

thanks guys for the nice comments...figured for the time they live in the sheathed knives made sense...

The hard part of this kind of training is not injuring your sparing partners. My karate Sensei was sparring with his top student who has trained with him for over 25 years and Sensei accidentally broke three of his student’s ribs. Our Karate Dojo teaches Okinawan, Korean and Japanese Karate and it sucks when you injure a friend. That and it sucks when you get called on the mat by the 1st SGT for injuring a fellow soldier and the dreaded paperwork to follow. “Well you see Top, I was doing a flying roundhouse heel kick and did not pull it enough and fractured Joe’s jaw;” does not fly with the command. I do like the fact that Dan has used several different weapons. You think there would be more G3s, FNFALs, HK91s, CETMEs (cheap Latin G3 clone) etc floating around. I came across a Chinese-contract Inglis Browning Hi Power in near mint condition this weekend at the gun show – instant drool factor!! Too bad it costs as much as a mid-size sedan. According to the provenance papers some Canadian missionary brought it back from China in the early ‘50s – praise the Lord and pass the ammo – eh?

I try to keep the weapons part of the story going and interesting...glad you liked it...i've seen some guns at shows that i too have drooled over and realized i would never own..a real Thompson for one...$6000 in mint condition and a class 3 licence....plus tons of others..really want a desert eagle MKXIX in .44 mag - but $1000+ for one handgun is out of my reach... (sigh)

i've been at home sick with the flu for the past 5+ days..and my latest chapters are at work..so i can't post anything more till i get back to it..will be a while guys..sorry...

becasue of the size of this now and some issues i have in this forum i'm gonna take the story to another medium at some point....if people are interested in continuing to follow along let me know here and i'll put a list together and get in touch with you to send story updates...

Yea I want to keep reading what you are writing.Send me updates please.

Please let me know where you post the rest.

sending private messages to you guys....will give you my e-mail addy and keep you guys updated...please check your messages there...

I love it.
My favorite character you have created is "Kris".
I bet you based him on a little bit of Ryan and some cool dude you must know huh?
I will send you my E-mail if that is ok?

More sir,More!!!!