she didn't get her 9mm till she was 10..and after i saw a waterskiing 6 month old boy the other day i can belive anything now!

Ok JMD.I agree now.I thought 5 yrs old for some reason.10 is a big difference!

GOTTA READ WHAT I WROTE BROTHER! ;-)

Just did read it bro!Very good writing.My only minor criticism is that you had Rain use a 1911?Maybe a 9mm instead like we discussed?haha.Still,kickass story man!

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Great writing bro,but ya gotta remember to say "Blaster" and not "gun".LOL

I like it, maybe even worth putting into manuscript... I may even have some ideas for you... lol

Sun

yeah i get off track with DL lingo once in a while..i do need to change gun for "blaster" - and i am keeping track of what i write and making a master document out of it...no need to let this go if this site goes down for some reason...

whatever ideas you got BTS I will listen to...

I just re-copied - edited, fixed the spelling mistakes and changed some stuff...so far i have 8 full single space 12 point pages of story..even i'm impressed! ;-)

It would be cool if Rain ran into "The Trader", not THE Trader that we all love and know, but someone going by the name... but that someone should be from the Co.'s past, like Abe or even... dum dum DUM!!! Dean! I think Dean would be cool... could go alot of ways with his return and meeting his sister and such... your story, I'm too lazy to write stuff anymore... though I used to be pretty good at poetry... "There once was a man from Nantucket..."
lol

Sun

i actually hinted in my story that Dean was dead..so i can't go back on that....i killed off some of the main characters in my writing like Mildred and Jac and Dean so i could make up my own new peeps and not piss off Golden Eagle too much

ooops... well uhh... I may have skipped an installment... lol
alright... I guess maybe it could be somebody like... Jak's son from a strange woman... didn't he get it on with some chick in Cannibal Moon from the Bayou? I believe he did... It should at least have something like that, I mean, she HAS to have at least ONE companion ya know?! I'm rambling... lol

Sun

no you are right..as the story progresses in my head i'm thinking along those lines....she will run into someone she may not know but has a connection...stay tuned..she has more adventures on the way to school for now i'm taking a break..got my own 7 week old to take on a trip!

I have agreat idea for ya JMD!

How about working me.you,and BTS into the story as Rains companions?LOL!

I am joking,but kinda serious?You could arm us like we discussed in our gun group?

...bodyguards? I'd hate to be a coldheart... but I'm not against being a villain! lol...

I was thinking more when she got older,not as body gaurds but as companions like Jak,JB,and Mildred?
I like the villian idea,just don't let us get killed off too soon,we would all make great "Arch Enemies"

huummm....maybe.....i could be swayed to do so

I know this is gonna sound crazy JMD,but I often fantasize that I am a new member of Ryan's gang carrying the weapons of my choice and roaming Death Lands.

I do this because as scary a world as Death Lands is it is also very simple.You just have to stay alive.

My life(and everyones)is far more complicated and "real"life issues like being poor and home foreclosures and career failure scare me alot more than Stickies or Cold Hearts.

Plus,I am handy with a blaster if I do say so myself.LOL!

well...i have that same dream..and i'm making it a reality...AP would have put me in but i asked to late...someone else said they would...just a person that helps out the companions...

i might throw myself into Rain's story..and i'm sure there is room for others..want to be a 16 year old love interest of Rain's? :-)

Yeah that would be Effin cool!!!!

I have an idea too.Since most girls tend to be attracted to guy's who remind them of their father?You could have me use a Sig and a maybe a machete as well as having an eye patch.(I am actually blind in my right eye and used to wear an eye patch as a kid)

I would be honored if you squeezed me in in any capacitiy,my Sig brother!